Uhh... clashing...
Seemed like it had potential, but then just turned into a repetitive mess...
Uhh... clashing...
Seemed like it had potential, but then just turned into a repetitive mess...
Nice!
Drum work is really creative, sounds kinda neat! Overall it was alright, and although it was missing some kind of lead melody, it still was pretty good!
No...
Song didn't go anywhere, and the high bells clashed in pitch with the original riff.
Like the intro
I like the intro and really liked the track. As soon as the lead synth came in around 0:35 it made the track instantly go up from a 6/10 to an 8/10. Lead synth is nice and pristine and matches well with the track. I agree with you, it turned out very well!
The Office Theme
I can hear The Office theme in there! Now that's not the bad of the song, however. It's just that you have those repetetive eight note hits going throughout the song. It is good after 1:38, then picks up again at 1:51. After 1:51 I didn't like it much, but overall the song is alright.
Oh Yeah i know :b
Hmm...
I loved the intro, it was beautiful and statuesque. But then when the breakdown came in, it sounded extremely out of place, and to me it didn't adequately match the beauty of the beginning. So at about 1:10-1:36 it seemed kind of weird, and then it went back down and then climaxed back up to the weirdness. All you really need to do is replace the the lead synth with something else, and make the beat stronger. The synth that comes in at 2:30 is great. I could see this song become very well done if you layer more things on, and change the synths. 7/10, 4/5
Thanks for the tips . I like you liked it
Very Well Done
Loved it. The lead sounds like from a carousel :P
Lol
Dayum that is nice!
I absolutely love this! Simply amazing! Did you happen to use Logic 8 for this? I love it! I hope i can make amazing stuff like this someday!
thanks so much! Like I said, I used Fruity Loops. FL is awesome.
Nicely Done!
The only thing I'd have to say is that the drum beat is a lil' too generic and doesn't fit the song well. Other than that, it's great! Synth Storm!
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