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What?

I understand how you're new to this, but the drum track is so incredibly basic, and the synths don't match, and it's all really just a bunch of bleh.

I think the word "crappy" you used in your comment describes it well, author.

HVI responds:

As a truthful response to this, and to any other people who agree with me about the "crappy" bit... Thank you, I totally agree with you.. this song was only meant to start off my account.. and didn't take me any time at all to really make.. my older and newer work is nothing compared to this... the whole top 5 situation was complete luck.. And I believe this deserves the score it now has.. Thank you again.

Nice piece, but...

To me, all of the brass sound way too fake and cheap. Everything else sounds pretty damn good. A couple woodwinds also have a fake sound to them. But i honestly like the track.

Malthiest responds:

Thanks, I'm still adjusting to using edirol with FL7.

god damn

hot.

Prodigal responds:

Man I love these reviews xD

Pretty nice

I like the beat (haven't heard the original, but still....). It sounds pretty good for modern hip-hop. Don't listen to branflake down there he obviously doesn't know anything. Hip-Hop IS repetitive in general LOL. This track seems more industrial than hip hop tho :/

Mister-Monker responds:

its only repetitive without lyrics you know,thanks tho mate,and mister poop flakewhen u make that beat let me know,would love to hear it

Just S-U-P-E-R!

Even without fx and details, i LOVE the atmosphere this track gives off, and the beat entrance is epic. Good job. I'd love to see this in full song form. PM me please when this is complete!

akirasartbox responds:

thx, you'll be the first to know went i'll update this one!

Overall OK

The song jumps right into hardcore, which I don't like. The bass sags and feels kind of stale. Synths need to be brought out, and need to be clearer, they are kind of crispy and rigid.

Sacrafan responds:

Really? Ok =3
I'll work on that =/

Good!

I'll go along with DummKind and say that this definitely isn't summer, it's more of a Winter kind of "playful" atttitude. At 0:50 the synth is kind of annoying and doesn't match the theme, but when it meets back up with the piano the result is alright. The drums need to be heavier i think as well, however other than that, this piece is pretty good!

Catstuffer responds:

Winter generally sounds cold... mby christmassy... raspy?? lol

Thanks for your review!

The Office Theme

I can hear The Office theme in there! Now that's not the bad of the song, however. It's just that you have those repetetive eight note hits going throughout the song. It is good after 1:38, then picks up again at 1:51. After 1:51 I didn't like it much, but overall the song is alright.

luksenborg responds:

Oh Yeah i know :b

Hmm...

I loved the intro, it was beautiful and statuesque. But then when the breakdown came in, it sounded extremely out of place, and to me it didn't adequately match the beauty of the beginning. So at about 1:10-1:36 it seemed kind of weird, and then it went back down and then climaxed back up to the weirdness. All you really need to do is replace the the lead synth with something else, and make the beat stronger. The synth that comes in at 2:30 is great. I could see this song become very well done if you layer more things on, and change the synths. 7/10, 4/5

Backbash responds:

Thanks for the tips . I like you liked it

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